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White Chalk Boards by ~xcarebearx:iconxcarebearx:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Haiku & Eastern


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Black chalkboards gone white.
Where will it go tomorrow?
With water comes black.





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©2004-2008 ~xcarebearx
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Submitted: Jun 4, 2004
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I am actually submitting something, it's a little haiku that I wrote of my World Literature class as a journal entry.

I hope everyone likes it.
For all I know I may end up deleting it like most of my other entries ;\

-Caylee

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~cluelessrockerchik:iconcluelessrockerchik: Jun 4, 2004, 5:01:33 PM
.........o my god.... caylee, I love it, I think that is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. Its like so complex, you have to reread it so many times and you get a different meaning out of it each time.

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:blowkiss: Spread the motherfucking love :heart:
~psycho-loser-kid:iconpsycho-loser-kid: Jun 5, 2004, 3:44:35 AM
Definately very metiphorical... I like it ;] And yes, there could be a lot of different meanings there.... Very cool.

See, You should deviate more often ;D
~ox0PyrettaBlaze0xo:iconox0PyrettaBlaze0xo: Jun 5, 2004, 6:10:21 AM
I remember this, it's the one I liked a lot. It's very nice. I heart you!
~juliev6:iconjuliev6: Jun 5, 2004, 6:45:55 AM
wow, i really like this... intense..

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smile for me
~akashka:iconakashka: Jun 9, 2004, 4:43:02 AM
:) awesome ! 3 lines and I feel again ... :heart:

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Enter the realm...
~mrcrypt:iconmrcrypt: Jun 13, 2004, 5:12:27 PM
:laughing:
this swirls
charges and envelopes
an auspicious (sp) piece

:worship:

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Global Comic Jam

Free Leonard Peltier
~doomit:icondoomit: Jun 14, 2004, 12:36:36 PM
It's so true. So basic and naturally true. Whatever Naturally means!!!

anyway... yeah. It's good lil haiku.

-doomit

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I AM NOT IN CONTROL!

-Doomit
~bled-for-you:iconbled-for-you: Jun 15, 2004, 6:26:22 AM
You really shouldn't delete this Caylee, I love all your work. I don't know if I've comment on it all, but I have read it..and it's all amazing. You have a sense of life that you don't see in many people, and you should grasp that.

I wish that I could read more of your work, you should submit more often, you're a really good writer

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Wish you were here...
~simplysad:iconsimplysad: Jul 3, 2004, 1:10:45 PM
maybe im just overanalyzing, but this actually meant a lot to me. as soon as i read it, the first thing to enter my mind was "nothing is forever". thats a really hard concept for me to believe because ive always been so sure that life is the way it is, so down and diluted, and will never be anything more. somehow, your haiku stuck on me though, and broke through the everdepressing feel of my normal day. thanks.

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simply sad, and listening to emo doesnt help
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